Adnan’s Poetry: The Absence of The Body

Adnan’s Poetry: The Absence of The Body

M.A. Haris Firismanda merupakan mahasiswa S2 Kajian Sastra dan Budaya Universitas Airlangga.

The city is always assumed to be a humanistic space because its presence encompasses the dimensions of human life with all its problems, even though the dimension of humanity in that space begins to be submerged by the relentless passage of time. This causes people to no longer be able to reflect on the corporeality they possess. They can no longer reflect on their own presence, that is, a body that has integrity in urban spaces.

Unfortunately, the body, which stores rationality and modernity, always buries humanity in urban spaces. Urban society is then no longer seen as a real body but as a symbolic one, thus shaping them like a robotic mechanism. This causes their bodies to be consumed by time and their entities folded into an artificial space.

This is what was realized by Adnan—the poet who forged his literary life in the city of Surabaya—who captures the side of life in urban Surabaya with all its busyness in the whirl of time and expanse of space. He captures this restlessness into his latest poetry book titled “The Body That Devours Itself”. This poet attempts to speak out against the condition of Surabaya, crowded with urban noise and development. This work leads to a philosophical reflection owned by Horkheimer—one of the philosophers placed as one of the pioneers of the critical school. He argued that there is a human effort to become rational, but this actually turns the rational human back into something irrational (Sindhunata, 2019:198). This phenomenon is not much different from development that ignores the environmental ecosystem, and the naturalness of nature that also equips humans themselves to survive. Moreover, it stores a phenomenon of a very individualistic social space towards each other’s busyness. From here, Adnan seems to want to present again the dimension of humanity that tries to become gods in themselves without seeing it wholly in a confined condition.

This phenomenon can be seen through the poem titled “11 Bodies in a Surabaya Room” including the poem titled “Searching for Human Body from Urban Body”, Adnan presents various urban society vocabularies that are dense such as city buses, noisy exhausts, motorcycles, train tracks, supermarkets/malls. These diction choices store the side of human life that is forcibly created by themselves as part of the advancement of civilization. Especially how the urban human body begins to lose its own humanity, trapped by the sequence of time especially in lines 23-24 of the poem as follows:

“…oh, how can I see my own head, how can I define myself…”

From this sentence, the poet begins to imagine something separated between the body and the soul or humanity that disappears due to being consumed by each individual’s ego in the dimension of space and time. Because of this, it also threatens the values of Arek Suroboyo regarding life on mutual cooperation, and it is also inscribed with the value of egalitarianism as a concept in unifying social interaction especially in this society (Hadi and Supratiningsih. 2018:398). Moreover, this value also stems from the experience of living together in a society, not from each subjective individual thought (Hadi and Supratiningsih. 2018:398). This simultaneously affirms equality towards each other in thinking without knowing any particular caste. Thus, this principle is built by Arek Suroboyo. They come from egalitarian and cooperative spaces. Not from individualistic life values.

Adnan’s poetry also presents social criticism. This is shown in one of the titles “Buying a Gallon From the Body of God”. The poem juxtaposes God as the highest degree, but it reflects the greed of humans for abundant wealth with the pretext of urban development. This is shown from the phenomenon behind the development that also harbors an act of corruption especially in the ninth stanza of this poem as follows:

“Writing a name or Corrupting, as long as check marked sitting with air conditioning, eating food taken from Mars using jets and helicopters”

moreover, the choice of diction “rolling” as a repetition of diction that frequently appears in the poem stores an image of urban human life’s greed.

Furthermore, the choice of diction “gallon” certainly has a different interpretation. If this poem only used the word “bottle”, it certainly would not store an image of something excessive. A gallon is synonymous with a large water bottle, which of course, means “more” or “wanting to be more,” indicating human life in perpetual lack. In the psychoanalytic view of Lacan, he explains that when humans are born, they will identify themselves through the real, the imaginary, and finally, the symbolic condition. The choice of diction for the gallon, as something excessive, stores a symbolic text condition of human desire (desire). This traps humans in the network of that chain of signifiers (Lacan, 1977: 54-55).

Therefore, the greed for development and the depiction of places in the poem shown in

the following verse:

“luxurious places, black suits, bulging bellies especially gallons”

certainly explains how humans in the urban environment are formed without knowing their own bodies as humans that are hard to find especially in urban environments. His verse contains cynicism towards that life.

Adnan’s poetry presents various social criticisms and reflections on the search for the body in the city of Surabaya, lost in the contained local values and the principle of mutual cooperation that begins to fade due to artificial community life. Thus, these poems then question again how the body is searched for as an autonomous human.

Adnan’s poetry stores a satire embedded in the network of signs in his verses. It is a reflection and re-questioning of the urban community body that has been consumed by the whirl of time and folded into the expanse of space in urban community activities.

Time, City, Body

Time, City, Body

Anugrah Yulianto Rachman–Nugi. Peneliti Arek Institute.

The work “People Walking from Front and Back” is an adaptation from a poem published on the Arek Institute website. This piece is an exploration of the body by Adnan Guntur while living in the city of Surabaya. He records the turmoil and bustle of urban life he experiences. This is poured out from the lines of his poetry, and through body movements and the concept of a performance art video that he presented for the first time through Sanggar Arek.

The adaptation of this work was also assisted by visual videographer Bernadus Deo Puspito. Both Adnan and Deo worked on this video very seriously. They engaged in long dialogues and discussions before creating this work. Deo, as the producer-videographer of this work, successfully captured the dimension of confusion and the bustle of urban society because that is the crucial point of this project. In this work, the dimension of the body and the busyness of urban life are very apparent.

Broadly speaking, this work actually delivers a revisit to the poem by Afrizal Malna titled “The Century that Runs”. That work can be said to have thematic intersections with Adnan’s work, namely the busyness of society regarding routines that are artificial and the busyness of modern human work. Afrizal tries to capture the life of this modern century that places humans always chased by time.

“Time doesn’t want to stop, hammer.

Time doesn’t want to stop.

A thousand clocks point to different times.

Everyone walks on their own, hammer.”

Afrizal questions the life of modern society that is chased by time. Humans, as if, are placed by him as people living in a running century. Time doesn’t want to stop, and they are chased by it.

Different from Afrizal, of course, Adnan tries to absorb the busyness of urban humans with his body experience during his literary life in the city of Surabaya. His body is placed by him as a figure disgusted with the noise of urban life. This noise is brought up in the background of this video’s work, placed among busy streets. The background depicts the coming and going of people walking from front and back—consistent with the title of this work.

Meanwhile, his sense of disgust is shown in the facial expressions and body movements during short scenes in this video. Initially, he shows disgust in his facial expressions. Then, he walks very slowly, which is in stark contrast to the background of people walking fast and bustling. The slow movement of his body, while walking, is a stark contrast to the background that is very fast and busy. This simultaneously signifies that he wants to reflect on human movement.

In that section, Adnan seems to reflect on society’s life to re-examine the dimension of time. He seems to say, “Is it time that runs too fast, or is it me walking too slowly?”. It shows a question about the life of urban society that has been shaped in such a way by their respective busyness. They walk on the streets as if being chased by a giant figure, wanting to hunt them, named Kala. Everyone is running from it, bustling in the streets.

Talking about time, this issue has not only been discussed by poets like Adnan or Afrizal. A renowned musician, Ebiet G Ade, for example, in his work titled “Menjaring Matahari” (Catching the Sun), also presents a reflection of human life on time. He questions the movement of time that increasingly crushes human life.

“The wheels of time crush us

Dragged staggering

Indeed, life is constantly pursued

Racing against time”

However, Ebiet is very pessimistic in viewing time because humans seem to be experiencing a disaster because of it, and nothing can save them. He wraps it with a religious spice that only God can save humans.

Besides the matter of time, there is a dimension of rebellion brought up in this work. This becomes more tangible when Adnan starts to put a black plastic bag over his body. This simultaneously indicates a rise in tension from the dynamics of this performance. The plastic covers half of his body. After walking very slowly, Adnan wears the plastic, and he begins to move his hands and head. His body seems to want to rebel to break free from something that shackles him. He keeps walking until he gets smaller and sits with the plastic covering his entire body.

The camera then focuses more on his body rebelling against something that entirely shackles him. His body is not visible. All that is there is the black plastic wrapping his entire body. No matter how hard he rebels, the plastic still covers him. The scene becomes more intense and tense. However, eventually, the body stops rebelling. It just lies down. Surrendering itself and defeated by the object attached to his body.

Perhaps, Ebiet is right that no one can fight against time. Similarly, with Adnan in this performance. He is powerless. No matter how much he rebels, he is still subdued. He is devoured and can only surrender his body to time. His body lies powerless. Humans can only rebel against time until they are defeated by themselves. Such defeat comes when he clings to death. The final part of this performance wants to say just that.

At least, his body has tried to rebel against those shackles. Even though he lies stiff, defeated by Kala, he has attempted to fight back.